Feb 18, 2010

Let me...



Let me be the last gold of skylight before it disappears over the horizon...
Let me be the feeling of the the first drops of rain on your fingertips...
Let me be the hidden treasures of love in the sepia-toned photographs...
Let me be the shared chocolate chip icecream on the slow walk back home...
Let me be the glistening tear that rolls down your cheek, all alone...
Let me be the brightest star that pins up the twilight cloak of your evenings...
Let me be the first cold wave that wets your eager toes...
Let me be the grass soaked in the morning dew that tickles your feet...
Let me be the bright blue behind that sea of white in your cloudy day...
Let me be the warmth of a crackling fire that heats up your face on a winter day...
Let me be the gentleness of a lovers first kiss... to be remembered for eternity...
Let me be the everything that gives meaning to your nothing...




~Annie.

P.S: Random :)

15 comments:

Meera said...

Just LOVED this, can't put in words how much. :)

ANWESA said...

Its a lovely "random" post !

Shaunak said...

warm post ice maiden :)

buckingfastard said...

let me be the first pee in the mornin that makes ur bladder weak

let me be the untied shoelace that bends u to get ur buttcrack peek

let me be the smoke of the euro 2 engines that sticks 2 ur cheek

let me be the blood of the splattered mosquito in ur palm that makes u freak

let me be that annoying neighbour who keeps askin "sab theek"!!

let me be your picture perfect dream whose realism is all the more bleak!!

in my defense i tried to control myself...just cudnt help :P

Destiny's child... said...

n let me be the fifth one to tell you how much I loved this post! :)

gargi said...

Random??

Beautifully random then.. =)
LooooOOOOooooOOOOoVED it!

Love always =)
xox

PS:oh..and i have to say.. the "comment" (or the poem) by "buckingfastard" above ^^^ made me laugh so hard! =D ..loved that too...hahaha!!

IcE MaiDeN said...

@Meera,
Thanks you so much! :)

@Anwesa,
Thanks! :)

@Shaunak,
Yeah I get mellow once in a while :P :) Thanks! :)

@buckingfastard,
WTF!!!!! OMG u totally KILLED my poem!!!!! *GLARE*
If you would have been on my gtalk it would have been slaughter! :P

@Destiny's Child,
Thanks so much :)
P.S: I dont think buckingfastard counts as loved the post fellow though... :| :P :D

@gargi,
LONG TIME!!!!!
where have u been lady?
Thanks so much!!!! :)
Mwah!
Miss ya :)

blunt edges said...

there's something really cool about the last line...i might just quote it someday! ;)

Kay said...

"the everything that gives meaning to your nothing"...oh those really are the best, the ones that lift you up when you feel you have nothing else to lose... great 'random'

Click On Portal said...

Let me be the last gold of skylight before it disappears over the horizon...I think this is the best line, so poetic!

IcE MaiDeN said...

@Blunt Edges,
:P Well thanks! :)
And someday when you get married to the female who falls for it, you can call me for the wedding and I shall give u both my blessings :P :D (n tell her who is the source of that line :P)

@Kay,
Thanks Kay :) Those are my fav lines too :)

@Click On Portal,
Thanks! Welcome to my blog. :)

Shas said...

Well penned. I was trying to imagine all that u have written. The feeling was beautiful

@ Buckingfastard,
LOL...that was funny.

IcE MaiDeN said...

@Shas,
Thanks! :)


@Buckingfastard,
damn u! ur hogging all the limelight... hmmmppphhh!!! :P :D

Miss Sunshine said...

<3 how i love it <3

IcE MaiDeN said...

@Appu,
Thanks! :)

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